Tarik Tyler
Laughter can’t go away
Even if you try to hide it.
Laughter will always be with you
No matter who’s with you.
Laughter takes your mind away
From the chaotic mess we call life,
And sometimes laughter can hurt a life.
Some laugh with their mouth wide open
And some laugh with their mouth close.
Some reveal their pearly whites and
Some will refuse
No matter what you do,
Laughter will always be with you
To brighten up your day
Or make the tears go away.
18 comments:
Charcer Burks
This poem was well written and I like the fact that you not only talked about how laughter not only brightens your day.
Nicholas Hill
This poem was well written and I like it because you wrote about sometthing that we all do.
I like your poem. Especially the part that said some laugh with there mouth wide open and some will refuse. I am a person that laughs with there mouth wide open. So it seems like you thought about everyone that laughs. Also your poem was excellent.
Rolando.Aguilar
i really liked ur poem how u write it and was a good poem and talks about how it brightness ur day
Gerardo Garcia
i loved your poem i thought it was cool and how it talks about how laughter is and how your day ends up being
Jessica Berrrones
The way that the poem was written helped me understand it more with the rhyming you added in. Your poem was amazing.
This poem has gone into a big topic andthe way it is used makes it seam that more important. This poem can make you appresheat laugther that much more.
this poem was written because this is something that you yourself enjoy doing. Another reason you wrote this peom because it connects with everyone.
YOur poem was really good and it was an interesting topic to write about. Laughter is a thing that all of us do do and its really cool.
OmG i ReAlLy lIkEd uR PoEm !!! kEeP It ↑.LOL
~NELLY VALLADARES~
irving i really like and enjoy your poem .. also it brightness prolpes day
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