Monday, March 30, 2009

"Secret Friendship"

Gaby Gil

He is my waffle
And I am his pancake
And he is my best friend
In the whole wide world
He is my butter
And I am his jelly
Together we make perfect PBJS
Cause I love you so
And I want to know
That you to know
That you always be right here
And I love to sing this song to you
Because you are so DEAR <3

7 comments:

Unknown said...

Nicholas Hill


I think that this poem is really is childish and should be written at a eigth grade or higher level.
( no offense )

Recycling For the Better said...

funny poem!
love it!
MH13

Unknown said...

I love the fack that you mixed to great things that go together and showed how you feel inside

Angel Simon said...

This is an excellent poem. It shows that the author would never separate from her/his significant other, even if it meant the world was splitting apart.

Leslie said...

I disagree with Nick. A poem can be anything you want it to be. If you want it to be about food within friends... go for it. It does not matter what you write about as long as you write with honesty and passion.

I completely loved this poem. It showed personality and creativity.

Unknown said...

i like this poem a lot lots of metaphore that are funny and at the same time romantic i like it

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